June 24, 2015

Eyes On You: Part One ( Premiere )

Larrie, Syria
 SCENE ONE :
Morning, street highway between
home & Mirror town.

[ Tiesun is driving her, Larrie &
Zain to the company TA picnic. ]

TIESUN: Judging by the way you're
going through the sucers, I would
assume you didn't eat this morning.

[ He deeply wraps the treat around
his lips, then let's it go.  Making
as much noise as he can. ]

LARRIE: Not at all.  I'm saving up 
for this feast.  There's going to
be an Indian half also.  
TIESUN: I've heard.  

[ She half smirks at his level
of excitement but Larrie is too
involved with his snack to notice.
Zain speaks up from the back. ]

ZAIN: I'll stick to the normal
barbecue, thanks.
TIESUN: I kind of agree.  We'll
see. Though I am excited for
the dances.

[ Tiesun looks over at Larrie out
of the corner of her eye & let's 
out a slight gasp. ]

TIESUN: What are you doing?

[ Larrie slips the candy paper
out of his mouth. Riping a
piece off with his teeth, he
starts to chew on it. ]

LARRIE: What? It still taste
like the candy.

[ He swallows it down as they
sit back in moderate disgust.

Tiesun starts to shake her
head while Zain makes a face
at Larrie in the car mirror. ]

LARRIE: Mmmmmm.


SCENE TWO :
Family Time Park, Mirror.

[ Syria & Hahn are adjusting the 
tables beneath the canopy area
as TA workers begin to arrive. ]

HAHN: Looks great.  I'd say the
extra two hours we spent here
this morning paid off.

SYRIA: Oh dear.  Could you 
look any more distressed when
you say that?

[ He sports an obvious frown. ]

SYRIA: Just messing with you
hun.  I know you get a little
hesitant around crowds.  

[ He smiles & they kiss. ]

HAHN: As long as I get to be
goalie in the game, I'm cool
all day babe.
SYRIA: Remember the kids leave
at 2 so the cases and everything
are locked up in the car.

I'm gonna go see if Sandie needs
any help carrying desserts.  

[ When Hahn can see Syria reach
the other side of the park, he takes
off slowly towards the parking lot. 

Opening the door, he digs around
in the case but is stopped by
a familiar voice. ]

CHARLES: Hey. Did I miss the 
start of hide and go seek?


[ Karie, Ace, Mark, Ski, Amber,
Dyminic, & Hithe are all making
their way through the food line
while Syria & Sandie help serve. 

Hahn & Charles are sitting down
diving into their plates. ]

SYRIA: Feel free to come back
for seconds everyone. There is
plenty.  So Ski will I be seeing
you play later?

[ She brightly smiles & Ski
starts to snicker. ]

SKI: I don't think so. Be happy
to watch though.
AMBER: What are these?

SYRIA: It's called chicken tikka.
Please try some.  

[ Dyminic smiles at her, walking
away to find a table. He passes
by Hahn waving. ]

HAHN: Look at Mr. Smooth over
there on the cycle.
Who is that?
CHARLES: He's Mirror's bakery
manager.

[ They watch as the guy removes
his helmet.  Shaking out his hair,
he steps down.

As he locks his bike, Sandie 
comes over for a chat. ]

"I'm Broderick, nice to meet you."

SANDIE: Pleasure is mine and I'm.
BRODERICK: Please.  You have the
most successful bakery of any TA.

Of course I know you.

[ Sandie's silenced by her humilty. ]


SCENE FOUR :

[ In the field; Charles, Hahn, Mark,
Ace, & Chais are playing against
Kyle, Lorenzo, Dyminic, Kiilyn,
& Pierre. 

Syria is sitting on the lawn with
Amber, Kristyn, & Monica. ]

SYRIA: Didn't think you'd be
getting a free show this
afternoon, did you ladies?
AMBER: Nope but I'm glad.  
Go skins!

[ Everyone laughs.  Inside the
game, Dyminic has the ball &
he's shuffling it down the lawn.

Passing it over to Kyle, then
Kiilyn takes it.  Ace attempts
to block but instead Kiilyn 
sails it toward the goal. ]

MONICA: That's my boy!

[ Hahn looks frustrated as his
team attempts to make it up,
letting Chais drive the ball.

However, his shot is blocked
by Pierre. ]

SKI: Come on Chais!

[ Dyminic gets the ball again
& Hahn prepares himself as
he charges toward him.

Gaining momentum, he offers
a strong kick that grazes Hahn
in the head. ]

HAHN: What the hell?
DYMINIC: Sorry man.  You really
should be wearing a mask. It
was an accident.  You alright?

[ Hahn doesn't speak but when
Dyminic comes closer, he walks
off in the other direction. ]


SCENE FIVE :
Hours later, at Mark & Ski's.

[ Larrie & Ski are relaxing on
recliners about to open their
beers. ]

LARRIE: Tried to get your attention
earlier at the park.  Hahn was
handing out booze before two.
SKI: Oh yeah?  Was that the
reason he stormed off in the
middle of the game?

LARRIE: I guess.  Or he felt
shown up by Dyminic.
Either way it's cool. Added
some sizzle to the barbecue.

[ They both take a drink. ]

SKI: You're crazy man.
LARRIE: You got it. Syria
can get down too.  I wasn't
expecting some of those
moves.
SKI: Right.  Things got
pretty interesting after
the kids left. 

[ Larrie grabs a notepad from
the top of the side table &
rips a small sheet out. ]

SKI: What's up?
LARRIE: Bet I can chew and
swallow down this whole
sheet of paper with no water.
SKI: Yeah right. Go ahead.

[ Suddenly Jai & Kiilyn enter
the front door.  Coming over,
they see Larrie inserting piece
after piece into his mouth. ]

JAI: What on earth?
KIILYN: Yo your friend is fried.

[ They leave, laughing hysterically. ]


SCENE SIX :

[ Syria & Hahn are cleaning up as
guests start to leave the park
area. ]

SYRIA: How's your head?

HAHN: It's fine.  Sorry about the
over reaction.
SYRIA: Well I'm gonna take the
rest of the stuff to the car.

Do me a favor and make sure
no ones still in the pool area.

[ She hands Hahn the keys and
walks away.

Entering into the building now,
Hahn hears voices and stops
behind the wall so he can't
be seen. ]

BRODERICK: I'd love to see your
set up some time.
SANDIE: Well you have my number
now.  Text me when you are
in town.  I can show you lots
of recipes I incorporated too.

 BRODERICK: Great.  I appreciate
it.  I should get going.

[ He looks over at Sandie who is gazing
off until space.  She is brought back
by the touch of his hand on hers. ]


SCENE SEVEN :
Back at Ski & Mark's.

[ Ski & Jai are talking in the
living room. ]

SKI: So how were we?
Not as bad as usual, right?
JAI: At least Larrie kept
his pants on this time.

[ They both laugh. ]

SKI: Speaking of.  He's been
in the bathroom for a long
time now.
JAI: I know.  Bet he didn't
lock it.  Wanna mess with
him?

[ Ski jumps to his feet with
Jai following close behind.
Putting his finger to his lip,
he motions for Jai to be quiet.

Pushing the door in, they see
Larrie laying on the floor holding
his stomach. ]


SKI: Dude, what happened?



Should Larrie slow his roll
or it just harmless fun?

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